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A tagsale kind of night by *magpie-poet:iconmagpie-poet:





A Tag Sale Type of Night

Paw through the shining hoard
captured in a fly fishing box—
embossed best quality plastic—
in a pseudoscientific order.

-throw away, come back to me-

Blue stone and battle axe earrings.
Not a personal statement! Just
perfect for a character
I never got to play.

-throw away, come back to me-

Blue vial necklace, pewter knot.
Very cool, if made for a flatter girl.
Why did I think a glowstick added
was a good idea? *never again*

-throw away, come back to me-

Boomerang with opal doublet,
small fire smoldering under
faulty adhesive—but real opal,
and a gift to boot.

-throw away, come back to me-

Wire wrapped fluorite—lovely
Stone, a dark purple eye. Reminder
of a summer’s day, but damned if
it doesn’t tangle with everything.

-throw away, come back to me-

Stone pendant on black silken cord.
Its weight reassuring the first morning
I woke with ill-thought out red hair,
something to toy with at a concert.

-throw away, come back to me-

Chain mail choker, now one of many,
and not the best. He’d needed the money
to pay off that ticket. And I liked it,
so heavy and sleek.

-throw away, come back to me-

Stoke the glass into flames, twist
the metal black and snakelike.
Stone eye look back once more
And tell me what you saw.

-throw away, come back to me-
©2005-2009 *magpie-poet
:iconmagpie-poet:

Author's Comments

you ever look at your accumulated stuff-gifts, mementos, all that, and wish there was some sort of spell, cast those things into the fire and regain the moments trapped in them and the people you've lost since? or is that one more insomnia rant?

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:iconfagashlil:
It does sound like a real treasure chest of items, all entwined with personal memory. I love the last stanza and the vivid idea of a snake being formed from molten metal. Really well written. :)
:iconellygator:
Beautiful poem. I like the spell-like intensity of the refrain. Your evocation of the meories tied up with the objects and the way you describe them is very vivid.

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"You must do everything yourself." (First rule of Alchemy)
:iconcathartic:
On the one hand: "ill-thought-out" needs that extra dash, to my eye.

On the other: :+fav: Bam.


The words are well-chosen, but the flow of words takes the cake. I don't know what it is that makes it work, but it does.

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Feed the hungry.
:iconmagpie-poet:
hmm. i think you're right about that. i'm too lazy at present to fix it here, but i'll fix the master copy ;)

and thanks!

--
"These days there are angry ghosts all around us--dead from wars... sickness... starvation... and nobody cares. So you say you're under a curse? Well so what, so's the whole damn world." -- Princess Mononoke
:icondrearythoughts:
This is truly lovely... wow! :clap:

--
*-*-*
All things must change
From something new
To something strange
*-*-*
Also check out my historical costume designs at ~Musichetta
:iconmagpie-poet:
thanks. if only it'd work :)

--
"These days there are angry ghosts all around us--dead from wars... sickness... starvation... and nobody cares. So you say you're under a curse? Well so what, so's the whole damn world." -- Princess Mononoke
:icondrearythoughts:
I know the feeling :( :hug:

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*-*-*
All things must change
From something new
To something strange
*-*-*
Also check out my historical costume designs at ~Musichetta
:iconhorai:
Hmmmm, very cool, lots of personal stuff in this methinks. I can relate to the message, I reckon half the human race can relate to the message. :thumbsup: :)

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:flaguk: Machines were mice and men were lions once upon a time, but now that it's the opposite, it's twice upon a time. - Moondog
:iconmagpie-poet:
hope so :)

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"These days there are angry ghosts all around us--dead from wars... sickness... starvation... and nobody cares. So you say you're under a curse? Well so what, so's the whole damn world." -- Princess Mononoke

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